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Sorry, you're on your own - part 3
« on: May 12, 2008, 09:44:18 AM »
Ok guys here is a start to part three - as usual I'm hoping you'll make comments and suggestions as the story unfolds.  Mike

Part 3:

Chapter 1: Christmas:

The few days between the return from Stagford and Christmas morning went swiftly for the Adams. Without Mandy’s trauma touched presence, the mood in the cabin returned to light hearted happiness. Amid so much deprivation and misery, Bob was profoundly grateful for the multitude of blessings that they enjoyed.

Christmas was always a time of celebration and thanksgiving. Gifts were given to celebrate the gift of salvation offered by God to the world through the birth, life, and death of Jesus. Unable to shop for material gifts to express their love for one another, the family found that this Christmas was somehow more meaningful than all the others before.

They spent the morning first in worship, then shared a brunch of pancakes with maple syrup, honey, and lots of the newly purchased butter. Bob gave Nancy a poem based on the 12 days of Christmas recounting twelve reasons that he loved her and promising a dozen dozen ways to show it (a 12 minute backrubs, a 12 minute foot massage, 12 pails of water hauled and heated for a long hot bath, etc.) Bob received certificates to redeem from Rob for one full wood box and a day off from chores from Nancy, lovely home made cards from both and a can of dark roast coffee from the pantry that Nancy said that she “had been saving” for him. Rob was given “new” books that he had not been interested before, but that his reading level had now reached. The gift included read aloud time from each parent as well. He was also given permission to use a full 50 rd box of 22-short cartridges to target shoot whenever he wanted and his own set of snares so he could set up his own trap line. He also received the one thing that he had said that he wanted the most: his very own jumbo pack of toilet paper! He had been dreading the day when the reserves of TP ran out. In fact, the last case was already open, but his mind was now at ease after calculating that he had at least a six month personal supply.

They spent the afternoon in Haven enjoying more roast pork than anyone could hold. With Virgil’s help Bob had returned to the feral pig carcass and brought the entire hog (less hooves and head) back to the hamlet. There it had been skinned and washed, then spitted and slow roasted all day from dawn until Christmas dinner. Willing hands turned the spit almost continuously. The huge sow provided more meat than the community had seen in one time for quite awhile.

The roast pork was served with the remaining potatoes from a fifty pound bag that the Abbott’s had bought for a few dollars at a potato farm on the far side of Millersville in the fall. The peelings were saved to plant in the spring because only the intact eyes in the skin were needed to sprout new plants. Bob and Nancy provided applesauce for all and the coffee and sugar for after dinner drinks. There was plenty of goat milk on hand and a good time was had by all.

After the meal, followed by hours of conversation and games, the party broke up just as it began to snow. It was the white Christmas Nancy had hoped for after all. By the time the family walked the four miles home, their coats and hats were covered in white.

It kept snowing all of Christmas night and most of the next day. Fat flakes weighed down tree limbs and lay like a thick fleece over the entire world. The family slept peacefully in their beds as the fire burned in their warm stove. All was well.


The next day, Bob began to feel ill. He didn’t exactly hurt. He just didn’t feel good. On the 27th he ran a fever and his joints ached. At this point he closeted himself in the bedroom and redeemed the chore free day coupon. He surmised that he had picked up an infection in the village.  He hoped and prayed that he had not brought whooping cough back to Haven and his own family.  He spent much of the afternoon sleeping and declined food. Nancy insisted that he drink and take the medicines that they had stockpiled against just such an occurrence. He did, more to keep her out of the room than to relieve his own symptoms. The precious antibiotics had been saved from previous prescriptions and preserved against this time of need.  He reasoned that isolation from him was the best thing his family could do to preserve their health. So he shut himself in the bedroom for three days taking nothing but soup and encouraging Nancy to sleep in the guest bedroom recently vacated by Amanda. Alone in the dark and unable to sleep from an increasingly persistent cough, Bob looked out over the moonlit yard under its shroud of white. He was grateful for both the antibiotics and for the over the counter cough relief and fever reducer on hand.  It was only when the medicine was in effect that he was able to sleep soundly.  As each dose wore off he would awake coughing but he dare not take more of the medicine than he absolutely needed.  He needed to save some in case his family developed the same symptoms. 

As he watched the clock willing the minutes to go by until he would take the next dose he viewed the stark moonlight and shadow balance of bright white and blue blackness, he had an overwhelming feeling not of his own mortality, but of some other impending doom. Something was coming. Something that he knew he could do nothing more to ready himself for, yet he could not rest. When he could not sleep, he prayed. God heard him, and gave him peace from the fever dreams. The fever broke and the cough decreased. He spent a fourth day in isolation, then washed the blankets and clothes himself in hot water with a generous amount of bleach. Then he washed the floor and wiped down the furniture with a solution of the same. Finally he bathed in hot water with strong soap. When he felt that he had done all that he could to disinfect himself and the room. He emerged from the cocoon to do his share of chores with the goat herd. Although he was not 100% over the illness, he did not think that he would be contagious anymore. The rare times that he used some of the remaining tissues, they immediately went into the blazing woodstove.

The isolation and disinfecting tactic seemed to work as no one else in the house, or Haven came down sick. Some thought that Bob’s long walk in the cold to Stagford and back must have weakened his immune system enough for a virus to take hold. Bob figured that he had been exposed to something in the village that the others had not been exposed to. Either he was not yet contagious when he associated with them, or they had been spared from exposure because he had immediately changed out of his bloody clothes and bathed after returning home covered in pig blood. No matter what the reason was, he was grateful that God had spared the others from the days of cough, aches, and chills.

Although he and Nancy kept their own medicine chest well stocked with relief from most flu-like symptoms, they did not have enough to share with even the small community at Haven. He doubted that the oldest and the youngest there could survive a battle with the virus without those symptom relievers.

After the flu passed, the family settled into a comfortable routine of patrolling the surrounding hills while maintaining their trap lines. It was a full two weeks before a fresh dog track was spotted and that belonged only to a single animal. Every few days, the snares, shotgun, or rifles brought in small game or birds. It snowed several more times and in early February, the snow was still deep when Bob and Rob were stalking red squirrels. The little animals provided only enough meat to flavor a decent pot of soup, let alone make a meal, but Bob was inclined to let Rob harvest them anyway. It gave the boy a chance to practice his rapidly developing hunting skills and extended their larder. Besides, Bob liked the fat grey squirrels better. They reminded him of playful cats and any red squirrel in the pot meant more feed for the grey squirrels still alive.

They were waiting for one of the noisy little animals to come back around the tree it had chattered at them from, when they paused and looked at one another with curious faces. Something unusual was in the air. Something they were unaccustomed to. Something they had trouble identifying immediately. The distant sound of an engine was winding closer.
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Re: Sorry, you're on your own - part 3
« Reply #1 on: May 12, 2008, 10:06:44 AM »
Thanks for another chapter.

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Re: Sorry, you're on your own - part 3
« Reply #2 on: May 12, 2008, 12:45:10 PM »
got me hooked!

i am loathe to offer any suggestions, because i think you have the technique and the direction-of-story down.
i'd rather be surprised.
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Re: Sorry, you're on your own - part 3
« Reply #3 on: May 12, 2008, 02:39:19 PM »
Heck - go ahead and suggest - I'm surprised where the plot went every time I finish a chapter!
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Re: Sorry, you're on your own - part 3
« Reply #4 on: May 12, 2008, 02:55:03 PM »
Chapter 2:

Zack Frye led the way. His Arctic Cat snow machine throbbed beneath him with exhilarating power. He felt like he was flying. The helmet’s facemask protected him from the stinging wind and blowing ice crystals. Behind him, Mike Unser and Nathan Zweits followed. This was cool. Life had never been better for any of them.

Life had been at a low point when the lights went out four months ago. But Mike and Nate had the right answers when Bill Munger had come calling to recruit his band of cutthroats. They had indulged every vice that had ever been held in check over the weeks that followed. When Munger and the rest of his band had run into trouble in the form of armed resistance, they quietly exited the rear of the stage without a scratch. They had covered a dozen miles or so before holing up in a farmhouse with a middle aged couple. He never came in from fetching firewood. Then the pair had moved in. The silly woman had been near starvation while two horses ate hay all day in the barnyard outside her window. When the horse flesh was gone a month later, the killers had left the corpses behind.

Another dozen miles had brought them to the city of Sawyertown. Where things were more organized than anywhere they had encountered in the past few months. The police actually patrolled the streets, and everyone seemed to have enough to eat. They didn’t care for the former, but thought the later was worth putting up with it. Anyone new in town needed to pass a review board to get their ration cards for food. It was then that they had met the newly appointed County Administrator. It didn’t take long for Mr. Hinckley to recognize their special talents. Their cover story of being ex-police officers fit in well with the equipment they carried and clothing they wore. Now, Mike and Nate were wearing badges too. Today, they were riding snowmobiles at top speed over the same ground it had taken them days to cover on foot. Life was good indeed.

Zack brought the heavy machine to a halt in front of his own home. His security escorts pulled in behind him and took up positions with their backs to the wall and the muzzles of their rifles pointed to the left and right as they scanned the approaching crowd. Munger had made the right call bypassing this place. He had said that with this many people clustered together, they would have eaten up all their food already. The houses showed they were dirt poor before the lights went out, so they wouldn’t even have cash to loot. Nobody who could afford better would be living in one of this little dump village. Larry had been right when he scouted the place with a walk through too. “Old people, and skinny kids, a shotgun and at least two rifles.”

None of the rifles were pointed at them today, but Mike and Nate still didn’t care for the sight of armed villagers. Their guide was totally at ease though. He was smiling and laughing with his former neighbors. The kids were oohing and ahhing over the snow-machines. Zack dropped a few things off at his house and quickly gathered up a duffle bag of clothes and other items that he had missed having.

His former neighbors were plying him with questions about the snowmobiles, his rifle toting companions in state issue snowmobile coveralls (that he wore too), the gasoline in the tanks, and events in Stagford and beyond. He told them with a smile that things were getting better. The Governor had organized county and regional reconstruction teams who were restoring order and distributing food to help people to get through the rest of the winter. He had been sent to spread the word that trucks would be coming through with supplies when the snow melted and organizing the relief effort.

He said to expect a food distribution from Stagford “real soon.”

Then the trio loaded up their sleds and headed up the lane toward the Adam’s cabin.

Zack pointed out the goat herd as the sleds cruised past the barn in the center of the road. Nate and Mike passed a knowing look to one another. They slowed as they went by the Fleisher’s burned foundation and the fresh graves in the yard.

None of the riders had ever been farther up the lane than that, so the view that greeted them was equally new to all as their tracks carried them over the footprints in the center of the road and up the hill. Rounding a wide bend in the road, the tree cover opened on the hillside above and they could see a log cabin looking down on the road from 500+ yards away. This straight quarter mile of pavement was open to view from the cabin even though a thick stand of bare hardwood trees separated the home from the road at this point. After the straightaway up the slope the road wound around the gently curving hill in a graceful curve around the ridge. A final stretch ran almost straight for 175 yards to climb to the level of the home before ending in a wide circular driveway in front of a solidly built home of pine logs. The poured concrete foundation was hidden from view by a wall of field stone surrounding the base of the house to a height of two feet, about a foot away from the walls. In warm weather the area between the low wall and the logs was a well tended and decorative planter.

Vehicles were tucked into an open storage shed on one side of the home. A closed shed that had formerly served as a chicken coop stood 50 yards away on the far side of a garden with permanent raised beds. The otherwise well tended lawn and grounds surrounding the house had a conspicuous number of downed trees throughout the woods bordering the road and yard. One large beech trunk had come to rest solidly across the driveway 80 yards from the house. Although some of the upper limbs had been sawn off. The majority of the heavy trunk had not been converted to firewood. Limbs on the underside held it a few feet off the ground, and several stubs of limbs stuck up from it several feet above the main trunk. Up until now, the trio had been able to just guide their sleds around the base or top of fallen trees. But here it seemed almost deliberate, that the top branches were interlaced with those of another tree which had fallen from the opposite direction. The base of the tree lay across the roots of a similar blow-down tipped in the opposite direction. In addition, walls of thick thorny blackberry bushes lined the driveway on both sides.

As the sleds came to a halt with engines idling, a voice called out. “Stay where you are or you’ll be dead before you can turn around.”

The family had heard the sleds coming. It had been so long since they had heard an engine that the sound was like a fire alarm going off in their heads. Their bug-out gear was already stashed on the ridge above their home. The rifles were loaded. The had examined the riders when they came up the road 500 yards below, but could not justify shooting them without knowing who they were or what they wanted. There was nothing they could do but get into good cover and await their arrival.

The three riders looked around but were unable to see speaker. Yet the voice had come from close by and had been loud enough to carry over the sound of their engines. Zack turned off his machine and stood up. The tall man removed his helmet revealing close cropped blond hair and called out “Bob, don’t shoot. It’s Zack. I’ve brought two men from Stagford to talk to you.”

Bob said “Keep your hands off your rifles.” As he stepped from around the corner of the garage/shed with the muzzle of his rifle firmly pointed at the strangers.

“So this is the guy.” thought Mike. He didn’t like the way Bob looked at him. Even though they had never seen each other before, each took an instant dislike to the other. Nate was more forgiving. Sure this guy had killed his friends. But heck, they had probably killed his too. He figured that was no reason they couldn’t at least work together. He flipped up the face shield of his helmet and smiled a toothy smile. “No need for the rifle, Mr. Adams. We’re from the government. We’re here to help.”
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Re: Sorry, you're on your own - part 3
« Reply #5 on: May 12, 2008, 05:01:27 PM »
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We’re from the government. We’re here to help.”

Probably the most scariest words in the English language! Keep up the great work!
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Re: Sorry, you're on your own - part 3
« Reply #6 on: May 12, 2008, 06:02:53 PM »
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We’re from the government. We’re here to help.”

Probably the most scariest words in the English language! Keep up the great work!

that is the "whites of their eyes" moment if ever i saw one.

here's my suggestion regarding the cattleman "robber-baron":  he's actually a good guy.  the townspeople may resent him hoarding all the wealth, but the service he provides is, in balance, far more valuable than the wealth when in it was sitting idly in their pockets.  make sense?  i'm a capitalist, and if you believe in free markets like i do, you'd be able to convey the message very simply.  maybe tell it through amanda's eyes how the people rose up and drove him out, redistributing his wealth amongst themselves, only to find too late that his way was better.  a latter-day tragedy of the commons, perhaps.
http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/The_tragedy_of_the_commons

i'd also be interested in more from the point of view of amanda and young rob.

you've got a real talent.  thanks for sharing it.
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Re: Sorry, you're on your own - part 3
« Reply #7 on: May 12, 2008, 06:21:01 PM »
+1 on that. Maybe he's not the nicest guy, and a hard man, but I would not make him a villain. In fact, he may be the key factor against having to depend on the "government" for help. Better yet, have a scenario where he and others fight to keep his cows and goods from being confiscated by the government for "the greater good".
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Re: Sorry, you're on your own - part 3
« Reply #8 on: May 12, 2008, 09:01:06 PM »
man i start to read a line or two and just cant stop. mike someone else not to forget is the pharmacist. i would like to know what happens to him also. please don't dom't forget about that lone gunman.

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Re: Sorry, you're on your own - part 3
« Reply #9 on: May 12, 2008, 09:04:44 PM »
great story, but please don't turn it into a government-against-the-people story.... i hear enough of that on this website already.
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Re: Sorry, you're on your own - part 3
« Reply #10 on: May 15, 2008, 12:54:37 PM »
just because someone SAYS they are from the govt - don't mean they are!

Here's more - please keep the suggestions coming!
Mike

Chapter 3: The Offer:

Zack went on to explain that a group had come out to Stagford from Sawyertown and begun to establish relief efforts including food distribution. The visit was in part to inform the residents of Haven and the surrounding areas that order was being re-established on a county level and that relief supplies were available.

The real reason that the men had come all the way up the mountain was because the authorities had heard of Bob’s run in with the looters. Zack assured him that there was no danger of prosecution - just the formality of filing a report with the County Representative. Bob could see the badges on all three men. With that sort of summons he had little choice but to accept Zack’s invitation to ride back to Stagford. He called his family inside and after a quick conference took his daypack and rifle and joined Zack on the sled.

In a little more than a chilly hour later they crossed the bridge and were pulling up in front of Dick Hinkley’s house on the north edge of Stagford. The house might be called a mansion in other times. At the moment a sign at the end of the driveway declared it “Administration – Stagford.” The yard was filled with vehicles, but dominated by a huge gasoline tanker truck.

No one questioned them as they parked their snowmobiles next to the tanker. Mike began refilling the sleds’ tanks directly from the truck. Nate trotted ahead of them up the steps and inside. Zack motioned for Bob to follow him. There were a half dozen armed men in the yard and on the porch. Some wore state police overcoats. Others were in civilian clothes. Bob felt a little out of place in his flectar BDUs and parka. A few of the men nodded to Zack, and Bob couldn’t believe no one questioned his carrying his rifle inside.

Nate met them in the entry way and let them know that it would be just a few minutes. Before Mr. Hinkley would be ready for them. They waited in what had been called a parlor, or sitting room off the main dining room. It served well as a reception area.

Bob paced nervously wondering if he was enjoying his last moments of freedom. Incarceration in the best of times would not have been pleasant. The thought of jail in a world without electricity was down right scary.

“Relax Bob, it’s just a formality” Zack sounded confident. But why did he have to come all the way to Stagford? Why couldn’t Zack have taken his statement at home? It didn’t make sense.

Nate stuck his head through the door and motioned them into the dining room. Dick Hinkley hadn’t changed a bit. Except he was even more full of himself than he ever had been. He sat behind the big oak dining room table with piles of papers in front of him. As Bob walked in, he saw several other men exit through a door on the far side of the room.

“Mr. Adams, come in. So good of you to come.” The slender silver haired millionare waved Bob forward without getting up.

“Ah yes, well I was told that I need to file a report - about defending myself.”

“So it was a case of self defense?”

“Yes. Yes it was.”

Good then.” Mr. Hinkley smiled. “That settles that.”

“Bob, I’ve asked you to come for another reason. Related to the first, it’s true, but another reason all the same. As you know the situation in Stagford is not ideal. The utilities are still not functioning and more importantly, people are short of food.”

Bob nodded.

“Things are even worse in Sawyertown. After the Governor appointed me Regional Coordinator I set up a community resource pool to feed the hungry and restore order. Everyone contributed what they had, and combined with what remained in the grocery stores, restaurants, and farms - everyone had plenty to eat.  Everything was split evenly based on the number of people in the household. But now food is getting short again so we initiated countywide plan to expand the cooperative initiative. We’re offering vouchers for the full pre-crisis value of the donated assets so that everyone will be fairly compensated by the county government. The vouchers can even count toward 50% of your county tax bill.”

Bob nodded again, unsure of what any of this had to do with him.

“Some people are less than cooperative. Some greedy unlawful men are hoarding their resources.  Hoarding food while people starve is evil Mr. Adams. And evil must be confronted.  Besides being wrong, it’s against the law.”

Clearly warming to the use of a comfortable and often used speech – the wealthy man stood and gestured to Bob with outstretched palm as if begging his aid.

“The pastor suggested I come to you . Amanda Fleisher has been visiting him regularly to work through the difficult transition that we all face. And she told him that you have some experience dealing with the kind of dangerous men like the renegade deputies that Durkee has doing his dirty work on the south end of town. Mr. Frye here tells me that you possess skills that are valuable in this situation. Skills that would allow you to help those in desperate need.”

Bob was uneasy with the idea that Amanda and Zack had been telling anyone that he was some sort of trigger happy gunman. But it was true that he was one of the few people in town who had actually been under fire. Most of the others were either the deputies working for Durkee, or elderly vets in the shadow of their lives. Anyone from more recent military service was probably either still overseas, or had been called up to active duty before the crunch.

“Good. Good. We need someone like you Bob. The town needs you. Your Governor needs you. And we need to know that we can count on you. Durkee can be violent. He assaulted me when I made him a generous business offer right after the lights went out. He’s had tax disputes with the village and resents anyone who is an authority figure. But I have a feeling that he will respect a group of his fellow citizens who to talk to him about the needs of the greater good.”

He paused and offered Bob a drink as he poured a pair of crystal tumblers full of bottled orange juice. Bob accepted the sweet luxury. It tasted like liquid sunshine.

“I’ve asked what’s left of the town board to put together a delegation to go and try to reason with Durkee. They’ve nominated you and Deputy Terry. Everyone else is either afraid to go up there, or already on Durkee’s payroll.”

Looking sage and fatherly with his white hair and game show smile, the County Administrator smiled. “Will you go Bob? Will you try one last time for a peaceful resolution?”

Zack was nodding his head in agreement behind Mr. Hinkley. Bob found himself nodding too. How could he refuse?

Chapter 4: Negotiations

Almost before he knew it, Bob and Bill Terry were being ferried outside village limits by Nate and Mike on the snow machines. A third sled carrying Zack and a man named Ed that Bob hadn’t met before lead the way. The sleds climbed the slope from the village to the farm gate effortlessly. The track was already worn by countless steps where people from the village had hiked through the snow to the farm gate to barter for the meat and milk that kept them alive.

The tracks made Bob wonder about Mr. Hinkley’s comment that the village supervisors were afraid to approach the farm.  It sure didn’t look like anybody was afraid to approach the farm.

As the sleds approached the gate, two deputies in their county uniform including hats, overcoats and riot guns stood inside the closed gate between the road and the farm’s long driveway. A three strand barbed wire fence stretched away in both directions to the left and right of the gate. The plan was for Bill to talk to his former co-workers and try to get them to see reason and stop defending the herd before lawmen started shooting fellow officers. Bob, Zack, and Ed would plead the case for the hungry people of Stagford, Haven, and Sawyertown (where Ed was from). They were also to assess the defensive capabilities of the farm, observe where sentries were posted, and what defenses had been arranged inside the house, and barn if possible with a special eye toward looking out for booby-traps. Mike and Nate were to stay with the sleds and come in for back up if needed.

The deputies waited for the sleds to shut down their engines. The riot guns were ready in their hands, but not pointed at the visitors. “Well Billy, what do you want? Come to your senses and looking for a job?”

Bill Terry explained what they were there for. The deputies made no comment but to radio to the house with walky-talkies they carried and received permission for two men to come to the house without weapons.

Ed volunteered to stay behind and chat with Bill and the others while Bob and Zack went to the house to meet with the infamous Mr. Durkee.

The deputies had patted them down and done a good job, taking even Bob’s pocketknife. He felt absolutely naked walking the 200 yards of snow swept roadway. There wasn’t a bit of cover until they reached the yard itself. Here immense maple trees bordered the lane. A tire swing hung from a low limb, lazily spinning in the wind.

Suddenly the front door opened and a grizzled man with unkept hair thrust a M1 carbine at them muzzle first. He pointed it with one gnarled hand like an extension of his index finger. Only his finger was on the trigger.

“Get in here. It’s cold outside!”

The head and the muzzle, disappeared and the door banged shut.

“Good old charming Carl?” Zack grinned at Bob.

Bob shook his head indicating that he didn’t think he wanted to answer right then and walked up to heavily painted door. He hesitantly knocked and it swung open. It had been closed but unlatched.

Carl Durkee stood just inside with his carbine still in his right hand.  It now pointed at the floor. “Well?”

“Mr. Durkee – “ Zack began “The town asked us to come talk to you.”

Bob nodded. But the old farmer just stood impassively waiting for more.
“Mr. Durkee – there’s a lot of people going hungry – in the whole county. The County has sent us to ask you if you would consider selling your herd. And they are willing to compensate you fairly by….”

The farmer raised his carbine slightly and pointed at Zack’s middle with the muzzle – using it like an accusing finger.

“Baloney. I already told Hinkley, and Smith, and Barnes that my herd aint for sale. Two cows a week is all I’m selling.”

Bob began to speak but the carbine shifted to point to him and the farmer continued.

“I know you think you got a right to what’s mine, but this aint gonna last forever. Sooner or later somebody’ll flip a switch and the lights will come back on. Then where will I be if I give my whole herd away? I’ll have no business to go back to.”

The old man’s face was getting red and his voice was raising.

“Now you two listen to me and listen good. I’m only gonna say this once, then I’m going to ask you to leave.

I haven’t let a single person in that village starve even though they looked down on me my whole life. Snotty little kids making faces when I walk in the corner store to pay for a sandwich because I smell like ****. Well you know what?  They’re there buying the milk that comes from the same place. Hinckley come into my home and tried to tell me what I could and couldn’t do. Said I HAD to sell my herd to him. He’s pushed me and this whole town around my whole life from the time we were little and I wasn’t gonna take no more of it. So I sent him packing and told him I’d damn well do what I wanted and wasn’t nobody gonna make me.

But as much as I hate to admit it, he did me a favor. He made me start thinking about what was going to happen when people got hungry. I mean REALLY hungry.

So I started looking out for me and mine in advance. I started charging what my milk and beef was worth. When all this goes away, I might not have a cow left, but I’ll have some cash tucked away to buy another herd with.

I had a herd of 212 when the lights went out. I put the heifers in the freezer right then soon as the weather was cold enough. No need to feed them a day longer than I had to. Then I started selling the least productive milkers. I’ve fed near three dozen of my cows to those ungrateful sumbiches in the village during the last four months. Now I don’t even get a “thank you” when I slaughter. They come to me with threats instead. I haven’t let a single ungrateful bastard starve. But they started getting ugly at me.

I could see the handwriting on the wall. So I did what I could to keep law and order. I put the sheriff on the payroll out of my own pocket. There wouldn’t be no law in Stagford if it weren’t for me. I put those four men on my payroll and kept them at their work. People in town had no work either. So I went in and offered jobs to them. Now I’ve heard it said that I’m a dirty old man for hiring those girls. Maybe I am, but the way I figured it, I need strong workers to milk those cows, move feed, and clean gutters. A boy that age might take it in his head to kill an old man.  Especially an old man with a lot of money laid aside. So I hired girls old enough to work, but young enough not to have kids of their own. When they are working here, the law is here to protect them so the punks hanging out on the corners don’t start raping them just for fun.  Me hiring them put milk and beef in a dozen houses. I’m the biggest employer in town. But do I get thanked? No I don’t. I get called a dirty old man!

When people ran out of money, I didn’t turn nobody away.  I took gas in trade. When they ran out of gas I told them I’d take guns and ammo. I figured every bullet I get hold of is one less that could come at me. Every gun I trade is one less to shoot down those deputies keeping that mob outside my fence.

Now you come here like Dickies’ lap dogs and demand that I give away what is rightfully mine for nothing but a promise to pay later. Well you can go to hell! You tell that gang at the gate that if they want beef, it will cost them cash on the barrel head, not an IOU that will never be paid.

When the lights come back on, Carl Durkee isn’t going to be a beggar. If they want my herd they can pay double what I’ve been asking. The price of beef is $100 a pound or the lawful transfer of the deed to a home inside village limits to me for each cow.”

The old man was livid. His face was red, spittle had accumulated at the corners of his mouth and his veins stood out pulsing on his forehead.

Before Zack or Bob could say a word he spun on his heel and left the room.

Outside the door they heard him shout “Richard, show these men to the gate. They’re now trespassing!”

Sheriff Richard Jones stepped from where he had been just out of sight in the next room, with a short barreled shotgun held horizontal to the floor at waist height.

“Gentlemen, please go.”


Back outside the gate Bob and Bill retrieved their weapons from the deputies in the long shadows of the early winter sunset.  Mike, Nate, and Ed looked expectantly at the returning delegation. Billy shook his head grimly and said “It aint right.”

He thought of his wife scrubbing her hands raw on other people’s washing. He thought of his kids not knowing whether they’d eat next week. “It aint right.”
A chill wind blew over them as Bob thought of his family.  Nancy was probably cooking a meal right now with the supplies they had carefully stored up against time of need. He thought about the possibility of doing without those reserves. He remembered burying the men he had shot in Fleishers’ yard who had murdered that family for their meager food supply. He remembered Dick Hinkley saying that food in Sawyertown had been gathered up from farms and stores and distributed on an equal per person basis no matter how much or how little each had saved themselves. 

“No, it aint right Bill. It aint right at all.”

Chapter 5: A rose by any other name

The group of men rode the short miles from the farm to the village, and added their snowmobiles to the growing number of them parked in Dick Hinkley’s wide circular driveway. There were a dozen sleds plus a tanker truck with gasoline for them and an olive drab generator roaring near the porch.  Thick cables ran toward the back of the house and lights shone inside.  The electric light seemed very bright after months without it, even in the half light of sunset.  There were a half dozen men in state police parkas carrying rifles on the mansion like home’s wrap-around deck.

Dick Hinkley was holding court at his dining room table. There were arial photographs of the village and the surrounding area spread over the table with a multitude of other papers. A dozen men and several women milled around inside the home. Some were from Stagford, others were strangers to Bob.  Trays of food flowed from the kitchen to the “war room.” A bottle of wine had been opened. Several men smoked fragrant cigars as the negotiating party reported the results of their encounter with the farmer.

“Good, it’s decided then.” Dick Hinkley positively beamed. He literally rubbed his hands together in satisfaction as heads nodded around the room. “Tompkins, tell the troopers to assemble the volunteers here at dawn for final briefing and weapons distribution. We’ll take the farm at noon. Have the butchers’ trucks come about 2 PM.”

Bob couldn’t believe what he was hearing.

“Mr. Hinkley, we’ve got no right to take that herd! If he doesn’t want to sell, that’s his privilege. Nobody is starving. In fact, it seems to me that this town owes Carl Durkee a debt.”

Dick Hinkley’s face drained and his knuckles turned white gripping the arms of his chair. But he smiled a politician’s smile and replied with a steady voice as if explaining to a child “I offered to buy that herd months ago. You offered again today on behalf of the County. Carl had his chance. Now he is losing his herd and he’ll be lucky if he lives.”

The light was fading fast outside and Bob could see that hope for logic was fading just as swiftly, but he had to try.

“Mr. Hinkley, if we take the, how would that be different than taking food out of this kitchen’s pantry?”

Dick banged the table with satisfaction and smiled a genuine smile. The idiot was finally catching on. “Now you understand my boy! This food is from the county reserve.  It is no difference at all. Share and share alike. Nobody has a right to hide resources for their own selfish reasons. That’s called ‘hoarding’ and it’s prohibited by county ordinance. You all need to contribute to the common good, for the good of all.  Everyone who helps me will be rewarded with a share of the resources and what remains will be distributed to those who recognize our authority.”

Bob saw heads nodding around the room. Billy Terry was nodding too.

Bob felt his own face reddening “That’s called stealing.  If you kill a man to steal his food, its murder and I won’t be a part of it.”

There was shouting behind him as Bob walked out of the Hinkleys’ house. He thought it was entirely possible that he might catch a bullet in the back, so he took the steps three at a time and immediately took to the shadows between the houses. Without any premeditation he found himself circling the house and was just outside the light from the windows of the room he had left as he made his way toward the rear of the church.  Bob caught movement above him and realized that he was under the watchful eye of a machine gunner in the bell tower. It was a good thing that the man behind the M60 was not as close to the window as Bob was, because as he slipped along the side of the house Bob heard Dick Hinkley’s voice clearly through the glass.

“Kill that son of a b-tch the first time he gets in the way.”

Dick Hinkley’s house was now an armed camp practically overrun with former state troopers, and various other recruits from Sawyerville and beyond.  Now Bob understood why he had been brought to town.  Hinkley had tried to recruit him into his private army.  Chances were good that everyone else on Hinkley’s payroll had been recruited in similar fashion and for similar reasons.  Bob wondered if Hinkley actually had clearance from the Governor or had simply declared himself County Administrator.  With communications down, who could tell?

Bob found himself approaching Fish Creek.  Looking upstream he could see that the bridge was blocked by a 4x4 occupied by two men.  He turned downstream and worked his way through the dark outskirts of the village.  He thought about warning Tom and Joanne Carter of what was happening but he wasn’t sure what their reaction would be.  Zack Frye and Bill Terry were already allied with Dick Hinkley and his private army.  His only other friend in the village was George Rogers, but the pharmacist had probably already left town.  Bob decided that he was once again on his own.
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Re: Sorry, you're on your own - part 3
« Reply #11 on: May 15, 2008, 05:14:33 PM »
Excellent! You know what I like about your writing, is the little detective details you put in, like how Bob noticed the heavy tracks leading to the farm, telling him that people were allowed to go to and from it, contrary to what Hinckley said.

Keep up the good work!

 
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Re: Sorry, you're on your own - part 3
« Reply #12 on: May 15, 2008, 06:27:18 PM »
still sitting on the edge of my seat. man you can put so much suspense in the story it's crazy. man as i sit reading your story i keep trying to guess whats going to happen next. dude i hate to read in general but i can't seam to stop reading these. and, i also agree with Workingzombie. thanks for the great reads please keep them coming

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Re: Sorry, you're on your own - part 3
« Reply #13 on: May 16, 2008, 03:37:00 AM »
Have read all three parts. These are great!! Looking forward to the next installment!
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Re: Sorry, you're on your own - part 3
« Reply #14 on: May 16, 2008, 09:45:14 AM »
I REALLY appreciate the encouragement guys :)

But now I need your help!  I wrote a big shoot out showdown for a simple ending - but I really didn't like it.  It seemed like a cop out to me.  So too did the real government as the calvary to the rescue in a nick of time. 

I need to work in the lone gunman and Amanda with her rifle and maybe even the pharmacist....  My brain needs a kick start!  I need your comments and suggestions for what comes next!
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