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Re: Sorry, you're on your own - part 3
« Reply #15 on: May 16, 2008, 10:11:18 AM »
I'm old.  No chance I can read this on the screen with normal type.  So I've got it all (I hope) copied into Word where I can make the type larger.  But while copying I got concerned that I'm missing something.  It seems that something is cut off between parts 2a and 2b.  This is what I see:

"Amanda hurriedly led the way toward her Uncle’s home. A woman stepped out on her porch to shake a rug, stopped and silently stared at the three of them as they walked down the center of Main Street. Vehicles lined the curbs. Some had windows smashed out. Others lac
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When the sun broke the horizon, the travelers left their imperfect refuge and drifted into the center of town. Under the dark traffic light in the center of the village was what remained of Virgil Hammond’s truck. ............


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Re: Sorry, you're on your own - part 3
« Reply #16 on: May 16, 2008, 10:33:19 AM »
man just a great story.
i could see a shoot out and Durkee loosing after inflicting severe loses with Bob helping out as best he can but he has his family to take care of. And alienating himself from the established county "barony" in the process, basically ending up with a family sniper team on a permanent bug out, maybe having to relocate. be hard for him not to suffer a loss though.
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Re: Sorry, you're on your own - part 3
« Reply #17 on: May 16, 2008, 04:06:34 PM »
I REALLY appreciate the encouragement guys :)

But now I need your help!  I wrote a big shoot out showdown for a simple ending - but I really didn't like it.  It seemed like a cop out to me.  So too did the real government as the calvary to the rescue in a nick of time. 

I need to work in the lone gunman and Amanda with her rifle and maybe even the pharmacist....  My brain needs a kick start!  I need your comments and suggestions for what comes next!


How about some kind of Mexican stand-off that keeps the status quo. Like the cow farmer threatens to blow the whole herd up if Hinkley tries to reposs his cows & farm. The farmer blows up something small to prove he has the means to carry out his threat. Maybe some of Hinkle's support melts away because Hinkley loses his temper and screams at his men to attack anyway, and they don't want to follow him anymore because he's just too nuts,and they see the Farmer has too many workers with guns to make it worth a fight.

Maybe the lone stranger with the mosin promises an alliance with the farmer that discourages Hinkley's
crew, because the stranger can bring in lots of help from a nearby community---- maybe a county dairy farmer's Grange association that the cow farmer belonged to, and his former dairy buddies will pinch in to help him.
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Re: Sorry, you're on your own - part 3
« Reply #18 on: May 16, 2008, 05:43:27 PM »
ok ok i got it.... the lone guy with a mosin is actually from these sksboards, and his nickname is bch7773.  It turns out he just got done saving the world from communists (who were behind the entire problems thats the backround for this story)

anyways, so hes going back home after saving the world, and he comes upon a lone isolated cabin in the woods.  Inside is 3 incredibly hot supermodels who were stranded there, and they were starving to death until he came along.  He saves all their lives and they are VERY gracious.  Did I mention these chicks are bisexual, because thats important too.

anyways, can you continue that story, because i like it.


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Re: Sorry, you're on your own - part 3
« Reply #19 on: May 16, 2008, 07:15:31 PM »
First off, great work so far.  I'm glad you decided not to make the cattleman a stereotypical bad guy.  I know knee jerk reaction was to resent the one guy that still has resources, but that's the beginning of a very slippery slope towards socialism, which I'm also glad you mentioned. 

If you need to get Amanda and her rifle in it, the logical place would be for her to help in the defense of the cattle ranch during the attack, perhaps with her cousin helping out after she's trained her. 

It seems to me that the lone gunman should have something to do with the return of the real government.  Either he was a local returning home from making contact with the Governor's office, or he's an infiltrator from the Governor's office being sent in to check out the situation after having heard that there might be a skirmish in the works.  If the latter case, then his weapon & attire would be to disguise where he's from.   Of course, it might be more interesting if whoever he works for or whatever his motivations, the lone gunman is tracking the looters that Bob took out, and knows that two of them escaped and are now pretending to be officers.  Maybe he was part of a team sent to secure the prison and when he got there found it was abandoned and has only now managed to track down what happened.  He could even be a private contractor hired for these purposes.  In any case, it would be interesting for him to be the herald of the return to order since it's the last thing you'd expect.  Or maybe he's just a survivor from one of the looters' raids that's trying to track the last of them down for revenge.

Preferably, the return of the government wouldn't be like the cavalry riding in to the rescue, but more like a vague bit of encouragement and a sign that things are not what they seem.  This would tell people that order is eventually to be restored & would help people get out of the looting mentality.  Maybe you can work the pharmacist in here, like maybe he comes back heading some state or federal response, or to set up a mobile hospital.  In other words, not enough to take care of all the problems, but a beginning to show people that they should try to follow the better angels of their nature. 
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Re: Sorry, you're on your own - part 3
« Reply #20 on: May 17, 2008, 09:57:20 AM »
I'm old.  No chance I can read this on the screen with normal type.  So I've got it all (I hope) copied into Word where I can make the type larger.  But while copying I got concerned that I'm missing something.  It seems that something is cut off between parts 2a and 2b.  This is what I see:

"Amanda hurriedly led the way toward her Uncle’s home. A woman stepped out on her porch to shake a rug, stopped and silently stared at the three of them as they walked down the center of Main Street. Vehicles lined the curbs. Some had windows smashed out. Others lac
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When the sun broke the horizon, the travelers left their imperfect refuge and drifted into the center of town. Under the dark traffic light in the center of the village was what remained of Virgil Hammond’s truck. ............
There's just a little problem with it, but if you go down about a paragraph or two you will see that it's just a double post of the same part.  I did the same thing with Word and you just have to delete a few lines to make it flow the right way.

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Re: Sorry, you're on your own - part 3
« Reply #21 on: May 18, 2008, 05:10:23 PM »
Good thoughts!  Now I need to find some writing time :)
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Re: Sorry, you're on your own - part 3
« Reply #22 on: May 19, 2008, 03:44:13 PM »

Chapter 6: Not alone

Bob worked his way through the darkness taking stock of his situation.  He was on his own in a village for all intensive purposes occupied by an enemy army.  He had a only his rifle, 100 rounds of ammunition in five magazines and the small day pack with minimal equipment.  He had left both his 45 and body armor at home.  His first thought was to get out of town and back home as fast as possible.

But what then?  He could slip across the river and walk home.  But that would only stave off the inevitable.  The farm would be raided and the herd butchered to feed Hinkley and his tag alongs.  But when the beef ran out, they would be searching for more and there would be nothing that an isolated homestead could do.  There wasn’t even anywhere to run for help. 

High above the town Carl Durkee’s generator kicked on for 5 PM milking.  The lights from the milking parlor shone out in the blackness of the dark pastures surrounding the valley’s south side.  It was like a beacon calling Bob.  The farm was the only place he could find help.

He worked his way along the creek staying in the shadow of the saplings that had grown up along the edge of the water.  He was nearly to the south end of the village when he saw the second vehicle parked on the road with men inside.  They were parked in the center of the road facing the lane leading up to the farm gate.  With the aide of his scope, Bob could just make out a dim slow moving figure at the gate.  At least one guard was on post at the far end of the farm lane.

He worked his way in a wide arc around the parked vehicle and up the slope more than a mile from the gate.  When he hit the barbed wire fence, he carefully crawled under it and made his way toward the sound of the generator through the darkness.


Sheriff Richard Jones watched the monitors in his makeshift security office.  He only had electricity for a few hours each 12 hours.  It was during that time that the electronics took the place of the roving sentries.  Between 5 and 7 AM his deputies were free to eat breakfast and dinner at a leisurely pace.  The security cameras and motion sensing floodlights mounted on the exterior of each building on the farm could pick up any movement within 50 yards of the house or barns.  This was why when Bob crossed the darkened pasture he had no danger of encountering with the mounted deputies, but also why as he approached the homestead a blinding floodlight clicked on audibly and illuminated the entire barnyard he was approaching.

Sheriff Jones had radioed his men who raced to predetermined defensive positions.  One of those positions overlooked the barnyard.  Deputy Matt Lawrence had been in this position countless times before since he had accepted employment from Carl Durkee.  He had long since memorized every shadow in his field of fire.  Now there was a shadow that did not belong.

“STAND STILL AND SLOWLY RAISE YOUR HANDS ABOVE YOUR HEAD!”

Bob could feel the rifle pointed at him.  “Don’t Shoot!”

He held his ground and very, very slowly raised both hands over his head holding the rifle’s neck in his right hand and the fore-stock in his left.

He heard a radio crackle and within what seemed like seconds he was searched and disarmed in a thorough and professional manner this time by the   Sheriff himself while Deputy Lawrence covered him. 

The Sheriff did not cuff Bob as he had expected instead he relied on his deputy’s rifle for security and asked “I asked you to leave politely.  Why are you here?”

“I’ve come to warn you.”

“Of what?”

“Hinkley plans to take the herd by force at noon tomorrow.  He has at least a dozen men on snowmobiles plus at least one machine gun.  A real one. Not a semi.”

Sheriff Jones nodded.  He had suspected that something like this was coming.
“Why are you here?”

“It’s just not right.  And if this farm goes, then mine is probably next.”

The Sheriff turned to the Deputy Lawrence.  “Matt I want you to let everyone know what is going on.  Its time for us to get out of here.”

“What do you mean you’re leaving?” Bob couldn’t believe his ears.

The old farmer stepped closer to Bob.  “Every man’s gotta make his own choice.  You gotta do what you gotta do.” He loosened the revolver in its old fashioned leather holster.  “Now  - if we have until noon, I need to get these girls to finish the milking before anything else.”

Bob was at a loss.  He couldn’t believe that the sheriff was taking his deputies off the farm, just when they were needed most.  He couldn’t believe that the old man was concerned about mastitis instead of an M60 mowing down his front gate.  The sheriff and all four deputies with all their rifles and gear appeared in the barn yard on horseback.  They simply rode into the darkness without a word. 

Bob found himself just standing at the door to the milk house unsure of what to do next until a small hand gently touched his shoulder.  “Mr. Adams?” Amanda Fleisher looked concerned.  “Mr. Adams, everything is going to be ok.”


Sheriff Jones and his deputies left the lights of the farm far behind.  They avoided the farm lane and the road entirely cutting cross lots through back gates until they left the horses behind the last wooded ridge before reaching the village from the north.  From this ridge they made their way along a trail that they had all travelled in the dark before.  When it reached Fish creek they dropped into the gully it had washed from the graveled banks and walked on ice and rocks until the last curve before the stream bed would come into sight of the vehicle parked on the bridge.  They keyed their radio twice without speaking and the signal was answered in kind.  Given that all clear they advanced to where Deputy Bill Terry lay on the river bank in earth colored coveralls.  A long Mosin Nagant Rifle and a pair of binoculars were nestled into a comfortable rest in front of his carefully screened observation post. 

Bill had kept an eye on the far side of town for Sheriff Jones for the past several months.  Both of them had felt it was wise to keep the fact that they were working together close to the vest.  The Sheriff figured that having a man available in town that no one knew was working with him would keep him better informed of what was happening in town.  And should Mr. Durkee get out of hand, it didn’t hurt to have an ace in the whole that the old farmer didn’t know about either. He had told the farmer that he had a plan for dealing with Hinkley, but even now he hadn’t mentioned that Bill Terry was part of it.

Bill had broken radio silence to alert the farm to the same news that Bob had brought.  Then he had resumed his watch on the traffic in and out of the village.  By his count.  Hinkley had 22 men already in town.  Half had come with Hinkley and half on snow machines which were now gassed up and parked at the Hinkley mansion.  There was a convoy from Sawyerville expected to arrive in the morning with several dozen men to help overwhelm the farm but no one wanted to travel on the roads in the dark.  So the trucks probably had not yet even started to move.

One of the guards in the truck was already asleep and when the other looked away Deputy Lawrence began his approach.  With warning on the radio every time the guard looked his way, Matt was within yards of the truck when the man picked up his binoculars to scan the distant moonlit roadway.  When he heard movement and lowered the binoculars he was looking down the muzzle of a 12 gauge riot gun just feet outside the window.  The 69 caliber tube looked the diameter of a sewer pipe to the man staring down the barrel he realized that the deputy was just far enough away to avoid any sudden opening of the car door, yet plenty close enough to send death with a squeeze of the trigger.

In a moment Hinkley’s force was down to twenty as the two men were stripped of their over coats, cuffed and blindfolded.  The vehicles radio was disabled and once they were searched and disarmed they were warned that they would be under observation should they attempt to escape and locked in to the back seat of the state police 4x4s.  The vehicle would protect them from the worst of the weather as well as detain them.  Deputy Terry would continue to maintain his observation of the road from Sawyerville and radio the Sheriff if anyone approached.


Back on the hill above town Carl Durkee sat across an ancient Formica kitchen table from Bob Adams.  With the milking done, the cattle had been fed and water pumped to them before the generator was shut down.  Now without the noise of the engine and milkers the farm seemed quiet despite the sounds of over a hundred large animals quietly settling down for the night.  The eight teenage girls sat around the room or leaned against the faded counter tops.

“You all know what is going on.” The old man’s voice growled as he began.
“It might get ugly before this is over.  I want you to know that none of you have to come back tonight if you don’t want to. Sheriff Jones and the deputies have left the property so I don’t know how safe it will be here.  When you leave the farm, I suggest that you stay together and go across the side pasture and come in to town behind the hardware.  That will keep you off the roads.  Either way I want to thank you for your hard work and give you something before you go home tonight.  Call it a New Year’s bonus!”

Bob realized that he didn’t have any idea what day of the week it was let alone where they were on the calendar.  Mr. Durkee pulled himself to a standing position with a scarred and gnarled hand on the edge of the table.  He opened a door leading off the kitchen.  The room had once been a formal parlor.  His wife had displayed her fine china on the mahogany side board that matched the uncomfortable and somewhat fragile chairs still in place but now covered with a thin film of dust.  On top of the dust the eight chairs held eight nearly identical piles.  “There’s one for each of you.  I’ve shown each of you how to shoot when you started working here just in case we ever needed to defend the place.  Now these are for you to take home and defend yourselves.”

Across each chair seat lay an SKS carbine, users manual, and cotton chest bandoleer with a single ten round stripper clip of 7.62x39 ammunition in each of the bandoleer’s ten pockets. The small rifles were incredibly sturdy and simple to operate, yet light and short enough to be operated by small framed shooters.  The girls all started to talk at once.  But it seemed that the old man had suddenly gone deaf.  He turned to Bob.  “Follow me.”
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Re: Sorry, you're on your own - part 3
« Reply #23 on: May 19, 2008, 03:45:58 PM »
ok ok i got it.... the lone guy with a mosin is actually from these sksboards, and his nickname is bch7773.  It turns out he just got done saving the world from communists (who were behind the entire problems thats the backround for this story)

anyways, so hes going back home after saving the world, and he comes upon a lone isolated cabin in the woods.  Inside is 3 incredibly hot supermodels who were stranded there, and they were starving to death until he came along.  He saves all their lives and they are VERY gracious.  Did I mention these chicks are bisexual, because thats important too.

anyways, can you continue that story, because i like it.


 :lol: :lol:


ok THIS IS JUST FOR YOU DUDE  - NOTE this is NOT NOT NOT part of the main story its JUST for BCH7773:




BCH7773 hiked over the ridge.  He was cold tired and hungry.  He was glad to be far away from everything he had left behind.  He had enough of what was there and decided to strike out on his own.  The ski town made as good a destination as any other.  He was grateful for his light pack even if it meant that he had been hungry for the past 12 hours.  The scent of wood smoke and the thin wisp from the chimney below had guided him over this ridge and now that the light was fading he could see the glow of a light in the mobile home at the roadside in the valley below.  How strange was it that the big black limousine had nosed into the ditch at the washed out bridge near that old trailer.  He hadn’t seen a living sole for days.  Now it looked like he had found Shania Twain’s mountain retreat.  He shook his head laughing at the idea.  Far more likely some prom date rental car had taken the turn too fast and been abandoned there when the lights went out.  His legs ached from hiking through the thick forest.  He was glad to be descending out of the evergreens and into the hardwoods.  In the half light and his exhausted condition he was preoccupied thinking about that out of place machine and didn’t even realize that he had been stumbling along a deer trail as it wound through the trees – until a white tail doe leapt from her bed five yards in front of him. 

Acting with muscle memory and the reflexes or a long practiced snap shooter he snugged the custom stock of his beloved SKS to his cheek and tapped Bambi’s mother right at the base of her tawny skull shattering the first vertebrae with a single well placed 123 grain projectile that sent 150 lbs of cleanly killed venison rolling down the hill with no more visible wound than a neat entry hole and only slightly smaller exit hole under her chin. He bounded down the hill after his kill like the feral predator he had become since the SHTF.  The deer came to a stop in the swiftly flowing stream.  He saw the door of the trailer open as he leapt into the water to straddled the kill claiming it as his own.  The last beam of the setting sun slipped through the trees on the ridge top directly onto the small deck in front of the trailer door as three barely dressed women staggered outside in response to the sounds of the shot and heavy bodies hurtling down the hill. 

They stood swaying from weakness and hunger their models features even more sharply defined in the fading sunlight than any photographer’s lamps could have made them months before.  Their red lips parted and their eyes shone with surprise at the sudden excitement.  Their limo ride was only supposed to have lasted a few hours the night they had been stranded here after the mountain resort ad photo shoot.  Without anything except their photo shoot costumes to wear they couldn’t even attempt to hike out after their limo had crashed in this remote valley months before.  Their driver had gone for help immediately but they had given up all hope of rescue.  The mobile home had been abandoned when they went there for help.  It looked like someone had recently moved out or only used it as a summer camp.  There were no other clothes, very little food, and just enough firewood to last until they could gather more from the surrounding hills to burn in the fireplace for heat.  But they had grown leaner and their hair grown even longer as they waited week after week for help to arrive.  They carefully rationed the meager food supply eating less and less and growing slimmer with each meal.  As the weather grew colder they had been forced to sleep together in their skimpy costumes for warmth.  They had grown extremely close to one another in their desperate isolation but after months of loneliness they hungered for male companionship as much as they craved nourishment.  And now all of their hopes had been answered. 

With her own predatory instincts not only intact but honed by months of inactivity Vanessa reached for her lipstick with a hand that quivered with excitement and purred to her girlfriends “We should get those wet clothes off and get the fresh meat inside.”
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Re: Sorry, you're on your own - part 3
« Reply #24 on: May 19, 2008, 05:08:14 PM »
Man BCH7773 is a lucky dude!

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Re: Sorry, you're on your own - part 3
« Reply #25 on: May 19, 2008, 07:41:52 PM »
Man, that is hilarious!

(the BCH7773 story I mean).
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Re: Sorry, you're on your own - part 3
« Reply #26 on: May 19, 2008, 08:02:14 PM »
Awesome story!!!!! I can't wait for the next part!
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Re: Sorry, you're on your own - part 3
« Reply #27 on: May 19, 2008, 08:13:27 PM »

ok THIS IS JUST FOR YOU DUDE  - NOTE this is NOT NOT NOT part of the main story its JUST for BCH7773:



 :lol: :lol: :lol:  groovy mike you kick ass man.  thats a great story!!!!
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Re: Sorry, you're on your own - part 3
« Reply #28 on: May 20, 2008, 12:14:43 PM »

 :lol: :lol: :lol:  groovy mike you kick ass man.  thats a great story!!!!

lol, Hey I owe you guys SOMETHING for sticking with the story this far ;)
Glad you liked it.
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Re: Sorry, you're on your own - part 3
« Reply #29 on: May 20, 2008, 12:21:53 PM »


Chapter 7:

In his barrowed over coat from one of the bridge sentries Sheriff Jones led his four man team into town using every inch of shadow cover that 20 years of patrolling the streets in the same village had given him knowledge of.  They slipped through buildings and under porches instead walking around them in the moonlight. The moon was still rising but people had become accustomed to going to bed early without the aid of electric lighting or entertainment.

They made their way slowly through the silent town until they came to the very edge of the property next to Hinkley’s.  The generator still hummed and the sound of laughter came from inside the lighted rooms.  There were at two men on the wrap around porch who showed no inclination of going inside.  Others moving about near windows that might possibly detect their approach.  The decade old night vision monocular showed no one in the darkness beyond the lights except the sentry in the church tower.  The five lawmen worked their way toward the church.  Bill had told them about the machine gun nest and Bob had confirmed that there was a machine gun.  Bill had been unable to determine the guard rotation schedule but it stood to reason that someone would relieve the man in the bell tower before dawn.  That was the opportunity that Sheriff Jones was waiting for.  He positioned his team between Hinkley’s home and the church doors.  He had a man watching the front and back of each building while he crept close to the church and silently removed the caulking from a basement window.  Once he was against the church wall and on the far side of the building from Hinkley’s he was safe from detection from the tower or the house.  He took his time working the old caulking loose until he could bend the metal bards holding the glass in place away.  Then digging his knife into the wood at the edge of the glass he began to gently work it forward until the top edge leaned out past the frame.  He silently tugged it out of it setting and propped it against the old stone foundation.  Four months ago, he might not have been able to fit through the ground level window, but he managed to work his way inside without falling on his head.  He relied on the slight noise to be covered by distance and the intervening floors between his entry and the tower far above.  As long as there was no one inside the church except the sentry, his plan would work.  He brought his gear through the window after him and with the aid of the monocular made his way through the pitch black basement.


Back at the farm.  Carl led Bob up the century old stairs of the farm house.  The kerosene lantern cast shifting shadows over the wall paper as they reached the landing. 

“You don’t have to stay, but since your still here I’ll make you an offer.”

At the head of the stairs the farmer unlocked an old fashioned lock at the first door they came to.  The spare bedroom had been converted into what could only be called an armory.  The six foot long bed was stacked 3 deep in rifles laid across the faded quilt.  There were dozens of them of every make and model in a variety of conditions.  The majority of the floor space in the room was occupied by 5 gallon buckets.  Each bucket was labeled with a cartridge designation starting with “.22” and progressing in order up to “.45-70”

Carl set the lamp on the single dresser and opened the top drawer.  It was nearly filled with pistols.   

“You take anything you can carry.  Keep it, whether we use them tomorrow or not.” 

Bob was speechless.  He went to the bucket labeled “308” and added four full boxes of ammunition to his pockets.  He looked for a well cared for rifle chambered in 308 or 7.62x51 like his own.  He selected a Remington 700 with iron sites since he couldn’t be sure that any untested scope would be true.  He pulled a pair of 1911 style side arms from the dresser.  The barrels on all three weapons were free of obstruction and un-bulged or bent.  The muzzle crowns were smooth and undamaged.  Each was rust free and the actions manually cycled smoothly.  That’s about all the quality control assurance he could do without test firing.  He took every spare pistol magazine he could find that fit, ending up with 7.  He took four 50 round boxes of 45 ACP which significantly weighed down his day pack but he figured that he might never get a chance to resupply.

Durkee took the lamp and lead the heavily burdened Bob back down stairs and outside toward the barns.  The farmer produced a key and opened the locked door to a poured concrete building.  The control room to the manure slurry had been converted into Sheriff Jone’s surveillance center.  A half dozen monitors and a control board were hard wired to the generator outside.  A bank of police radios sat in chargers next to a scanner.

“You can see anything that comes at us from these cameras when the generator is on. Remote start.”

Carl pushed a button and Bob hear the generator come on.  After a few seconds the monitor screens came up showing a half dozen views around the farm including the empty from lane from the road and the unmanned gate.

“Coffee pot is in the corner.” Bob heard it start brewing. “Outhouse over there.” The farmer pointed to another building through the single small window in the concrete.

“Don’t take long.”

“Use the radio on channel one to let me know if you see anybody coming.  I’m gonna get some sleep.”

Bob nodded and was left alone in the electric glow of the surveillance screens.


Sheriff Jones knew that the stairs to the bell tower creaked and squealed like a stepped on animal. There was no way a man could make it to the top of the tower without alerting anyone even semi-alert at the top of the stairs.  He didn’t even try.  Instead.  He waited in the darkness at the foot of the stairs.  No matter which door the relief sentry came in, he would need to use the stairs to reach the top of the tower.  At 9 PM on the dot, Sheriff Jones heard his radio click three times.  He keyed back the single click to Roger receipt and flexed his tired legs.  He heard the back door to the church open and saw the flashlight beam cut through the darkness inside the church.  All the better he thought.  The relief sentry would be coming from the lit house using a light and be more blind in the dark than had he let his eyes adjust without it.  The man came forward unconcerned with his rifle slung.  As he reached for the railing at the foot of the stairs he heard the click of the single action hammer cold in the darkness and a steely voice telling him not to move or speak.

He didn’t. And in minutes he was disarmed, cuffed, and gagged.  With the cold ring of a pistol muzzle pressed into his forehead he heard his unknown captor hiss

“We got no beef with you.  Lay here quiet and we’ll let you go.  Try to get loose or make noise and my partner here will stick a knife between yer ribs. Kapeesh?”

The wide eyed man nodded vigorously but silently.  Richard Jones threw the over coat over the man’s head to ensure that the bound man didn’t see that he was alone in the darkness.  There was no knife wielding partner left behind to guard the prisoner.  But the bound man didn’t know that. 

The Sheriff started up the stairs.  There were 19 left if Billy’s count was right.  He carried the relief sentry’s rifle with him half way up the stairs before continuing up the creeking stairs at a leisurely pace.

“Yer late.” said voice from above. “I’ve had to whizz for the last hour.”

“Oh!” Jones said and began to hurry up the last few steps, when he reached the top he was nearly running.  He made no move to slow his momentum as he cleared the doorway and plowed toward the man waiting for relief.  Instead he converted the momentum into impact using the rifle butt just the way he had been trained to use a night stick snapping it into the sentry’s head with all the speed and leverage he could put into it.  The man was lifted completely off his feet and thrown into one of the four brick pillar’s supporting the roof.  He bounced back regaining his feet.

“Give up!” Jones growled.  The ex-soldier instead tried to unsling his rifle.  That just couldn’t be allowed.  Jones drove his buttstock straight into the man’s face, smashing his nose and snapping his head back.  His feet peddled backward and he bounced off the iron safety rail into a heap on the floor.  This time the buttstock slammed into the back of his head.  He might of already been unconscious, with no give in the floor of the bell tower to absorb the impact.  He was definitely out of commission now.   As soon as he was sure that the man was out of the fight, Jones looked at the house for any sign that he had been seen.  There wasn’t any.  He checked the unconscious man and was relieved to hear that he was still breathing and disgusted to smell that his bladder had released.
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